Secondly the lighting, at four oclock my room is almost pitch black and its so damp and cold. The untidiness of my bed is also horrific, just a pile of blankets, sheets and a duvet all scrunched up in the middle of the bed. Then there's my desk covered in books, pens and rubbish along with my PJs and sports gear spread everywhere . On the floor there is all my stuff for my I-Pod and I-Phone like my charger and headphones which are plain white and usually tangled up. A metaphor is a trope or figure of speech in which an implied comparison is made between two I didn't find any "I's" that were not capitals. I think that your ideas are great, they describe your room well. The touch, it's soft, smooth and warm at night. Overall I am hoping my parents will be convinced that my room needs a change like some new sheets on my bed, some colour on the wall and to get rid of that useless desk. It's the worst having such a messy bedroom. There are special items in my bedroom that cost a lot of money and one of those accessories are my Hats . It was an excellent piece of writing. I walked through the door and stood still just looking into my bedroom. Don't even get me started on my desk it's hardly a desk anymore it's just for storage.anything my mum tells me to pick up off the floor I most of the time just chuck it to the top of my desk or in the three sequenced in size draws that I can no longer hardly open because there full of unneeded nonsense already. 3. The bed is the main part of any bedroom because that's where everyone spends the most time. My mum sees I have to clean my room each day. Im proud to call the bedroom mine but im going to change it sometime in the future. Ray Davies Natalie Ray Hynde, Then there's the senses - smell, sight, sound, touch. I like black and white because it doesn't make the room feel too bright and the way it is placed and I like it that way. My bedroom, is a wonderful room to hangout in. The theme of my room is simply Mine there are no requirements, no needs, nothing it is just whatever I make it to be. It is literally a big, black dust nursery because its elevated to nearly touching the roof and Im short. Good description of your room Peta. Jordan Papalia Baby, These are 5 words you would use to describe my bedroom. These windows have a beautiful view in spring when all of the flowers have bloomed. The colours in my room are bright with my duvet which is mixed with bright light colour then there is my light blue curtains hanging by a Dark aqua chair. Overall I give you a 4. My room doesnt smell that good. Logan I like how you tell the truth but your spelling needs work and maybe thinking about what your trying to say. My room has a modern style to it because of the things I have in it. The walls of my room are brown and the door is white the a gray handle. One of the necklaces is a sharp sharks tooth from Cairns and a golden dragon necklace from Yorkshire. What a great description of your beautiful bedroom! Because if you dont and try wade through all the clothes spread out and risk breaking your leg or ankle on toy cars or getting bits of lego stuck between your toes. My tiny wardrobe has been painted the same colour as my wall apart from the handles and legs which i think looks pretty cool, and my desk is covered with random bits of paper and a couple of monitors. The things in my room that have a beach theme are my messy bed sheets my coat hangers my pillow on my bed and on my couch, my desk chair and my blanket The chook shed is made out of corrugated iron. It has a very comfy mattress and white sheets. My clothes they are placed in piles beside the wall because my dad has not got any draws for the room. I liked the way you captured the masculine feel of the bedroom. I think your punctuation is good but some of your sentences are quiet long, you should of made them into 2 sentences instead of 1. An excellent description of your room Meg. Very well written. Remember to carefully proof-read and edit your work. I have a globe lamp on top of my chest of drawers but the bulb in it broke so its all taken apart, sitting next to it is my 3D colosseum puzzle. I look towards the mountain it is covered with the blinding white snow. By William Middleton. I hate tidying my room but this is something that needs to be done more often. In the left corner when you walk in is a stack of books, a few being written in swedish. Its small and cluttered, so there's no where to move. Above my bed are decorations and then across from my bed there is my creamy white set of draws. Very descriptive and easy to imagine your bedroom and feel how special it is to you. When I look out the window I also see the mountains and some time you can see car lights on the side of the mountain when it is dark. Now you can go to your room and make it the way you want it and design it the way you like it. Everywhere you look, a dolphin peers back at you from the ethereal underwater scene of a poster. My curtains are also blue. Nishmat Kol Chai In Russian, It has all the colours and designs that I love. That is why I think my bedroom is the best place in the house. But you could be a bit more tidier. All my clothes and shoes are hidden away in the wardrobe so you dont have to see them. The typical teenage boys room is a disaster area. Well I have a double bed that is really comfy and warm, a laundry basket that is full. With blue sheets on it and a big pink and blue duvet. E.g pain main, Logan you had lots of spelling mistakes like you said flour instead of floor and 'i's not 'I' \. One time I bounced a ping pong ball over my bed and landed then bounced off the floor and landed in the cup it was insane. I agree with the carpet needing vacuumed, I've been telling you for weeks too. good work. If you have a brother or sister whos bedroom is usually dark and smelly, you perhaps might call their bedroom a swamp, too! In my family you don't get much down time, from playing sport to hanging with friends, so it's good to do nothing. So in conclusion I think my bedroom has a good layout, colors, furniture and style and I like it a lot and so does Jackson. The only messy things in my room is my carpet. In my personal opinion I do love the way my bedroom looks and how it has a theme and a great view! My trusty pair of working socks, a tatty old picture of scooby-doo and last years embarrassing school photos. I have four dark grey walls, and on the furthest wall there is my double bed. I think that you could work on adding a few more descriptive words. This is the place I go to when I have to go to bed or to just chill. Overall I think Bridget has done a good job of writing a piece of descriptive text. When you walk in you will see my bed, cupboard, desk, drawers and my bed side table. My bed, My bed is a single bed it is in my opinion very noisy but also very comfy. The next thing your eyes are drawn to is the cluttered, varnished oak shelf in the back left corner of my room. The pattern is bad, It is a circle and 2 squiggly lines that run beside it and keep doing the same thing until it reaches the roof. The lamp rests on a stack of six books that are all ever so slightly faded because of the direct sunlight that streams in all day long through the window. Look at the picture and make sentences to describe the bedroom. Write something about yourself. I personally like the way my bedroom feels and looks. My mini drawers has three drawers on top of each other with the middle one being slightly longer than the others. The size of my bedroom is actually the right size. Straight ahead there are windows facing east. They are happy to enjoy the predictable lives they have, rather than search for an exciting purpose in their existence. Near those drawers is my wardrobe and on top of that wardrobe is a lot of mess. I also have a desk and chair next to my big window. Stinky socks, crumpled papers and forgotten towels. Its unique to me because its my room and I like it the way it is. 036-536 88 75. There are books all over the place. Every room needs furniture to make it yours and in my room the most important piece of furniture is my bed. When you walk into my room you will see famous NBA (National Basketball Administration) players, such as Kobe Bryant, Michael Jordan and Allen Iverson it's like my gold to my treasure box. Not too big that it's not cozy, and not too small it's cramped. My carpet, I like my carpet Dont get me wrong I like the light creamy color that gets me comfy, I like the nice pillow feeling of it and how it eases me to sleep really quickly. when you said mental trip you were bang on. The layout, accessories, colours and the style. 5. as narrow as a hole. I like the clear description, so it's easy to visualise. The color of my wardrobe connected to my wall is black I would probably want to change the color to the same as the wall. You can imagine a mother of 3 or 4 children calling her home a zoo. They are stacked up quite messily. Pretty good if only you could see how i see your bedroom. My room is the best room in my house I think this because of the warmth and the softness in it, (mostly my bed) I would like to give you a tour about my queen size bed. Another metaphor that could be used is, " The bedroom is so messy, it looks like a war zone." My bedroom is bright like the sun. What is walking dictionary a simile or a metaphor? What is a metaphor for a metaphor? A metaphor for a metaphor?! A1: there isn't such thing it is just called a metaphor. A2: Alfred Jarry called it a pataphor I move things around to make it look tidy. Two clocks that are big and annoying, a computer that is big and fun and lamp that is bright, speakers that are loud and white curtains white and a mirror that is big. 2. as far apart as the poles. Now to the TV, it's too big! Nicely described George, your room is currently a blank canvas so you can do a lot with it. On the far wall where the window is there is beautiful multi-coloured painting of a cow and in the right hand wall there is a small built in wardrobe with a mirror on one of the doors and on the other there is the same deep sea green as on my feature wall. As you walk up the old skinny hallway, at the end, opposite the bathroom, you will find a bedroom,which you'd agreed looks like a bomb has gone off and spread all the junk everywhere, and yes its my bedroom, possibly the messiest in the house. My room has a hint of rotten food in it to make sure my sister will stay out and it has smelly clothes all over the floor. Overall I love my room to pieces because it belongs to me. Yes you do have a warm a cozy bed which I struggle to get you out of in the mornings lol. My bedroom is just the way I like it. Above my bed there are another three picture that my mum had embroidered for us when we were little. MY BEDROOM By my bed there is a book shelf on top it has a lamp and inside it has a variety of books, by the corner there is another book shelf and it has a green lava lamp on top and more books below. Thank you so much for cleaning it this weekend Colt!!! Many people have bedrooms and many people look at theirs differently but we all have something that makes our own bedrooms ours. People who work from home might have a big computer setup with large monitors, webcams, and microphones. Then it leaves me the curtains, the ugly pale curtains, I would also change the colour of these. My bedroom is a forest, heaps of clothes scattered on the floor is the Theirs the unbearable feeling of not being able to find anything and always having to resort to yesterday's old grungy smelly shirt that you chucked on the floor after you got home the day before, or just having to use week old socks by spraying deodorant on them so they don't smell bad because you seemed to have misplaced every other pair. For next time you could use more vocabulary and try not to repeat words. On my desk there lies a golden skull candle. Most of the punctuation was good but there were a few mistakes like writing the word twice. 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